Going through changes...

An editorial illustration should give you a glimpse of what is being written in the article. So let's get it right...

It should be more focused around the main characters...

The lady pointing her finger should be more upset.
The central character should look more lost for words...
Other guests should have more fun.

The central character looks confused. She needs to look distressed.
She doesn't look like she is the main star of the party...

Not there yet...

Bingo! Now it is ready to be coloured...

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